Your Story Lyrics Critique- Acoustic/Rock Song

by Danielle M.
(Houston, TX, USA)

Deep in my heart
I felt the tug of your smile
Tatooing my with feelings
That I've never had.
When I'm without you
I fall to the sky
Breaking my own heart in two

It feels so real
Always me and you
It feels so good
The innocent lover says...

Your life is all my life
You opened up my eyes
And exposed the truth
Between me and you
I know
There will always be an us
Yes

Now set in my heart
The lies that you taught
Engraving with the signs
I refused to recongized
And throught all these years
Never worth my tears
(You did me wrong my dear)
You broke my heart in two

It was never real
It was always just you
You played me good
The innocent fool

You love was all a lie
You covered up my eyes
And surpressed the truth
Between me and you
But wait
Was there ever an us
No

At first glace, your heart is right
Your love is pure
(yourlove is pure)
But the truth, your sad
Your heart is tainted with the lies
You still believe
(believe and told me)

You love was all a lie
(your love was all my life)
You covered up my eyes
(You opened up my eyes)
And surpressed the truth
Between me and you
But wait
Will there ever be an us
(there will always be an us)
There will never be an us
No