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Your Love lyric critique alternative

by Rhz
(India)

Lead on by your love
I am lost in transition
Apathy in my vein
For a life without you

The quiver of your lips
The butterflies of our first kiss
Sticks with me
Oh how you used to smile so easily

Thorns of the rose we held
Now pierce my heart
A cut so deep I don't deserve
Bleeds me of my invinsibilty

Burden of the mistakes I've made
Now bury me deep
into the bed of oblivion
Afraid to breathe again
I suffocate

Never thought you'd slip away
Or did you run?
Long gone and moved on
Why have you forsaken me?

Yesterday is gone
I cant go back again
Ghost of the days gone by
Surround my life

Out through the door of your life
Closed on me forever
I stand and stare, wondering, if
Once gone is gone forever

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