You...Me...Us Lyrics - Critique

by Sophie
(Radnor, PA, USA)

Hi! This is my first lyric to a song. It's not very far, but I think it has some great potential. I'm not really sure yet what genre it would be in, but I'm pretty sure that it will be a slower song. But I could be wrong. Any critiquing or feedback is welcome!!! Thanks!!!

Verse 1
Lifting me when I’ve fallen
The rainbow after the beating rain
Brightening up every day with just a simple word
Everything that you do makes me feel like
We share love

Chorus
You and me
There’s finally
An us, ohh
You and me
We are one
Just like before
Woahh

Verse 2
Being together is something that feels like love
With you is just the best
Wouldn’t want to change that
Opt. and Neither would you
Cuz we’re together and that’s all that matters

Chorus
You and me
There’s finally
An us, ohh
You and me
We are one
Just like before
Woah

Verse 3
Us a word
Used so often
It’s lost all its meaning
But not with us
Cuz it means too much
To let it be something meaningless
We brought the meaning back

Chorus
Cuz you and me
There’s finally
An us, ohh
You and me
We are one
Just like before
Woah

Verse 4
Hanging out was the best of my life
You gave me the greatest joy of all
One could ask
That’s why:
Chorus
You and me
There’s finally
An us, ohh
We are one
Just like before
Woah

You and me…

Oh…