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You Won't Be The Same- Pop Song - Lyrics Critique


(California)

Verse 1
You were amazing
You were awesome
I thought you were the one that I needed in my life
But people can change
And you really did

Chrous
Cause now I even can't tell who you are
And now I'll move on, and never coming back
And if you get another gril, I
I hope you won't be the same

Verse 2
Was it that unexpected
For me to find out
What you do, with the time
When I'm not by your side?
I thought we were meant to be...

Chrous
Cause now I even can't tell who you are
And now I'll move on, and never coming back
And if you get another gril, I
I hope you won't be the same

Bridge
Cause I don't do things
That could hurt others
But you, you don't feel the same
Since you did this to me

Chrous
Cause now I even can't tell who you are
And now I'll move on, and never coming back
And if you get another gril, I
I hope you won't be the same


Cause now I even can't tell who you are
And now I'll move on, and never coming back
And if you get another gril, I
I hope you won't be the same




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You Won't Be The Same- Pop Song - Lyrics Critique

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Jan 01, 2010
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The song is HOT!!
by: Anonymous

I Love the idea of the song and Lyrics fit the song, You gave me a good idea!! peace James Cook

Jan 24, 2010
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Nice!
by: Anonymous

Love the song! :)

Feb 20, 2010
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What is it about?
by: Anonymous

Its difficult to figure out what this song is about. "What you did to me", "what you do with the time" you're not with me, "hope you won't be the same..."

WHAT did the person do to you?
WHAT does he/she do with the time?
Hope you won't be the same as "WHAT?"

Your song is all very hazy, without concrete real-life details to give it life. All in the head, with little to connect it to the senses.

A bit too ambiguous, and therefore unfocused.

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