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You could have been the one- country style - lyrics critique

by emily rogers
(uk)

Did you think before you did it?
What would happen to my heart?
That It would shatter into pieces
And I’d be back at the start

Last night while you were sleeping
I had no idea about her and you
But now I’m tossing and turning
Our love is gone and you are too

You were everything to me
My earth, my sky, my sea
What did I do to make you leave
Don’t you know you could have been the one for me.

If only I had showed more often
What you meant to me
Then you wouldn’t have strayed
And you’d still be with me

You were everything to me
My earth, my sky, my sea
What did I do to make you leave
Don’t you know you could have been the one for me.

I should have been the only
The only one you loved
What did she have that I could not provide?
Was I not good enough,
Not good enough for you

You were everything to me
My earth, my sky, my sea
What did I do to make you leave
Don’t you know you could have been the one for me

But even that didn’t stop you
From making the biggest mistake of your life
And now that you have lost me
I will have to start to fight




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You could have been the one- country style - lyrics critique

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Sep 08, 2010
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I liked it
by: Anonymous

It was actually pretty good. I loved the lyrics. Keep writing :)

Oct 13, 2010
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good job
by: Charlie in Alabama

love the chorus

Nov 02, 2010
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Excellent effort
by: David

The chorus is awesome. Some of the verses seem a little off in timing, though. Keep writing and writing and writing...

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