You and I - R&B, pop, anythin really - lyrics critique

by M.M.A (Double MA)
(NyC)

its called you and i, i hope u guys like it. im trying to see who might be intersted in making this a real song. i've contacted record producers etc.


chorus
you and i
were sweeter then apple pie
you and i
are now living our separate lives
you and i
i always thought was meant to be
but, you and i
are nothing more then history
you and i (fades away)

verse 1 (male)
baby girl, i now this isn't what you wanted,
and trust me, i aint the type that would be frontin
cause, i miss hearing your voice, and reading your text,
and i hate the fact i call you my ex
n baby girl..im sorry i aint your prince and shinning knight,
n baby girl ever since you left i havent been alright
but im holdin on, and prayin for this dream
cause baby girl, you and i might just be...

chorus
you and i
were sweeter then apple pie
you and i
are now living our separate lives
you and i
i always thought was meant to be
but, you and i
are nothing more then history
you and i (fades away)

verse 2 (female)
when you walked out and left me with a broken heart..
boy, my whole life just broke and fell apart
i spent days,weeks and even months
reminiscing on the times we shared, but boy it wasn't enough
cause i miss everything about you
like your messages saying baby how are you...
and these memories, im never going to let go..
Cause in my heart, baby i just know..

chorus
you and i
were sweeter then apple pie
you and i
are now living our separate lives
you and i
i always thought was meant to be
but, you and i
are nothing more then history
you and i, you and i, you and i

Verse 3
if we give it another go,
baby me and you, we can run the show
cause the time we had wasn't enough
so baby, lets try this time, lets be tough
cause if this love is really strong..
then baby, lets prove all them wrong..

chorus
you and i
were sweeter then apple pie (apple pie)
you and i
are now living our separate lives
you and i
i always thought was meant to be
but, you and i
are nothing more then history (history)
you and i, you and i, baby you and i

comment please and tell me what you guys think...
hope you guys like it.