You And I lyrics critique- hard rock

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You And I lyrics critique- hard rock

by Rune
(Modesto, CA)

06/23/11

You and I Music and lyrics by Nicholas Bailey
Rune

Verse 1
I gaze into an angels eyes in the ashes of the flame
As she realizes she's fallen to her doom
All alone in an empty world I'm feeling much the same
The angel screams and I scream out with her too

Chorus
Time, It waits for no man
I'll wait for no man at any time
The world is getting so cold
We're feeling so old, You and I

Verse 2
I open up my eyes and see the world is full of lies
It's days like this I just want to regress
I cling to old excuses, any one that I can find
And hang out in the back with all the rest

Chorus
Time, It waits for no man
I'll wait for no man at any time
The world is getting so cold
We're feeling so old, You and I

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You And I lyrics critique- hard rock

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Jul 16, 2011
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Great Job!
by: Catrionaa Maxwell

This Is Really Good! It Could Do With Being A Bit Longer, Maybe Adding Another Chorus Or A Bridge, But So Far So Good! :) x

Nov 17, 2011
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Good lyrics
by: Anonymous

I think you have great potentail it is a little short but I like it. If you're like me short amount of lyrics and more guitar solos it is perfect.

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