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"You" -alternative song - lyrics feedback

by Marcos Amaya
(Cudahy,Los Angeles,California,United States)

(Verse-1)
Woke up this morning,
thinking of you
Keep trying to get over
(all)the things you do,
A Siple Walk
A simple stare
A simple mention,
Oh I need Repair

Just Need to stop
Need to get through
Falling aprt...
All because of you
and you don't notice
you don't care
but i still feel for you
this aint fair

(Chorus)
I'm trying,I'm trying so hard to make sure I'm over
This feeling Inside of needing you like water
I know that, I know that you don't feel the same way
and I can't sit around waiting for someday
I'm gonna be ok
starting this very day
All you'll be is a past
Obsession, it wont last
and All i need to do,
is Stop thinking You,
You,You,You,You(uuuuu)

(Verse-2)
First time I saw you
thought you could be
Somebody special,
Special to me
Just wanted to get close
and try and talk to you
to bring you in my world
show you what i can do

but you weren't intrested
no you didn't even try
and now I'm sitting here
watching you pass by

(Chorus)
I'm trying, I'm trying so hard to make sure I'm over,
This feeling inside of needing you like water
I know that, I know that you don't feel the same way
and i can't sit around waiting for someday
I'm gonna be ok
starting this very day
All you'll be is a past
obsession, it wont last
and all i need to do
is Stop thinking of you,
You you,you you,you(uuuu)

(Bridge?)
that's all this song is about is you
and i just can't keep on wanting you
can dream all night,
can think all day,
about the way,
that we could bee
it's just i want,
someone to love,
but i must learn
and this is true
that at this time
it can't be youuuu

(Chorus)
I'm trying, I'm trying so hard to make sure I'm over
This feeling inside of needing you like water
I know that, I know that you don't feel the same way
and i can't sit around waiting for someday
I'm gonna be okay
starting this very day
All you'll be is a past
obsession, it wont last
and all i need to do
Is stop thinking of you
You you you you
Just stop stop thinking of.....
Youuuuuu! =]

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"You" -alternative song - lyrics feedback

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Sep 13, 2008
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Amazing
by: Anonymous

Best Song ever!!!
more People should comment!
all other songs suck!
j/k but yeah awesome!

Oct 23, 2008
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wow
by: Joana

what a beautiful song! :O

loved it so much +.+

it reminded me about the person i love so much, someone i will never get out of my mind *.*

keep writing songs like that (:

*

Nov 08, 2008
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wow
by: Alice

Hi
I LOVE YOUR LYRICS!
I THINK UR OLDER THEN ME IM A MIDDLE SCHOOLER
WHO HAS SONGWRITING CLASS EVERY WEEK!
YOUR LYRICS ARE REALLY NICE
ITS ALSO LIKE TALKING ABOUR IT IN MY SITUATION
OK THIS IS MY STORY I REALLY LIKE THIS GUY AND I REALLY CANT LET GO! OK I G2G I LUV UR LYRICS!

Dec 27, 2008
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Wow
by: James

Cool Song Dude,
Wish there was a recording of it
I'd listen ot it!
but youre good
should post more!!

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