years apart - lyric critique

by talitha greer
(victoria point QLD)

the story had to go on without him
years apart nothing could happen
but I made myself keep on going
and I finally got through it

so if you ever feel you've lost your way
have no strengh to get through the day
just look inside yourself

just look deep inside yourself
reach down inside your soul
you will find out the answers
to get you through it all
just look deep inside yourself
you will find your way

if only you had been a bit younger
years apart so nothing can happen
but no matter how dark the tunnel
I know it has a brighter end

so if you ever feel you've lost your way
have no strength to get through the day
just look inside yourself

just look deep inside yourself
reach down inside your soul
you will find out the answers
to get you through it all
just look deep inside yourself
you will find your way