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Well I know what you're going through. I often have that same problem with songs i write but something that I've found works is listening to songs that have metaphors and picking up on what they mean. Example Shout at the devil this song is not about telling off satan himself it's about standing up to authority and how authority will control everything if someone doesn't stop it. Just try stuff like that it's worked for me also you might try using a thesaurus I had one song that i had trouble coming up with any metaphors for, and the ones that i did come up with sounded to cheesy. I went back to my original lyrics and found synonyms to make the song deeper and less cheesy. any way as paul stanley of kiss once said, "sometimes the more you embellish something the less powerful it becomes" this was when they did the mtv unplugged session but i feel that it could apply to lyrics as well.

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To make phrases more memorable, you can use dificult words, sentences that seem to be controdicting, etc.

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