Worst of Me Lyrics Critique- Metal

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Worst of Me Lyrics Critique- Metal

Just wanting to know if the lyrics are easy to follow. Can you relate to what they say? Do they grab your attention?

Worst of Me By Nick

Its easy for people to missunderstarn
And see only what they want to see
You think the worst of me

You're the only one that I ever wanted
But it won't work, It never works
Cause you think the worst of me

You don't love me anymore

I keep you hear inside my heart
Can't let you go, I'd fall apart
But you think the worst of me

I'll never forget what you said to me
On the day you left, and now I see
You think the worst of me

You don't love me anymore

It's easy for people to missunderstand
And see only what they want to see
You think the worst of me

You don't love me anymore
You don't love me anymore
You think the worst of me

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Worst of Me Lyrics Critique- Metal

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Jun 13, 2011
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by: Anonymous

I love your lyrics & Id like to work with them , if you're interested email me @ xxpiruxx@hotmail.com

Jun 19, 2011
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appreciate it
by: Rune

I appreciate it but the song is already finished. If you want to hear it, the song can be found here
http://www.myspace.com/560462379

Feb 08, 2012
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So-So
by: Anonymous

Honestly, i wasn't too thrilled by these lyrics. Maybe because I've been writing for most my teen years and I've learned how to avoid the most common cliches of songwriting, but still. I feel as if the lyrics could be a little more deep. You've got the right idea going on, but it feels as if you're holding back. There wasn't a lot of power behind your words. One more thing, don't rhyme if you don't have to. Rhyming helps to determine a flow, but if you already have a pretty solid one in mind, don't bother stretching for a rhyme, it'll sound very nursery. You're getting there.

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