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World Stood Still Lyrics Critique - Country song

by Kristopher G
(MN)

I dont know what i should do with an intro to this... I have writers block :( Or can you start a song with the chorus?

When our eyes met, the world stood still
The thought of you, what do I do
This cant be real, I hope its true
Im so in love with you

Two years later, we?re side by side
I lift her veil and kiss the bride
We run and hop into the car
I cant believe you are my wife

When our eyes met, the world stood still
The thought of you, what do I do
This cant be real, I hope its true
Im so in love with you

Pretty soon a baby is due
I held her hand and wished her well
And never did I leave her side
Doctor said it?s a baby girl

When our eyes met, the world stood still
The thought of you, what do I do
This cant be real, I hope its true
Im so in love with you

It was eight short years til we visited that hospital again?.

He?s been here since three and been asking for you all day.
Listen to me dear, I wont make it though the night
If you believe in me, I?ll see you again some day
My eyes are weak but I?ll try just one more time

When our eyes met, the world stood still
The thought of you, what do I do
This cant be real, I hope its true
Im so in love with you




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Mar 07, 2009
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by: Anonymous

I loved the story. I like a good sad love song. The thig that confused me was at the hospital when the song changed to being about "he", when it started about "she".

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