Won't You Be Mine lyrics Critique

by Alessandra

Your bubble gum lips
You would never dream of this
A kiss, a touch, a feel
I would never believe it true
To be followed by the light
That makes you glow
Oh how it feels follows you
And live in your shadow

Your candy like eyes
You could make every girl cry
With your sweet words
And the teasing ways
Break their hearts and runaway
Why is it you couldn’t stay?

Am I the only one that could tame the man?
That could bring him to his very knees
Stand before him,
And hear him cry
Won’t you be mine?

Your fun like persona
Could bring all the girls to ya
But the girls didn’t suit
You wanted something more
Nothing less than extraordinary
He had to search door to door

Am I the only one that could tame the man?
That could bring him to his very knees
Stand before him,
And hear him cry
Won’t you be mine?