Won't Be Leaving Alone Lyrics Critique- Country Song

by CarlyDelane
(Georgia, United States)

Hey everyone!
I'm a young country singer/songwriter looking for some HONEST critique! It's definitely a country song, so read over the lyrics and let me know what y'all think!

V1:
Makin’ my rounds at the local bars,
Flirtin’ with the boys in the fancy cars,
Lookin’ for a man who can handle a girl like me.
Blonde rough ‘n’ tumble walking over here
With a skinny little girl and an ice cold beer
Put on some Hank lemme dance and then he’ll see

C:
She ain’t right, for you
Don’t it feel wrong, for you too
I’m the pretty one, smart one,
You should be takin’ me home.
You don’t know what I can do,
But I promise when I’m through,
You sure as hell won’t be leavin’ this place alone.

V2:
The country band plays my favorite song,
Me and the girls are singin’ along,
Here comes that ol’ boy on through the crowd.
He says, “hey baby come and have a drink with me”
“You’re the best lookin’ girl I ever did see”
Now she’s gone and we’re dancing in the crowd

C:
She ain’t right, for you
Don’t it feel wrong, for you too
I’m the pretty one, smart one,
You should be takin’ me home.
You don’t know what I can do,
But I promise when I’m through,
You sure as hell won’t be leavin’ this place alone.

B:
She didn’t stand a chance when she walked in through that door,
Hell, he won’t think about her no more, more , more!