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wise smoker lyrics critique - accoustic rock

by sanket sharma
(mumbai,maharashtra,india)

washed up news
playing it again
people without clues
watching it again
hows the actor been
his clowns drop by
the world cried sorrowed
tissues n tears borrowed
the famous book
the famous author
the regret look
the wise smoker




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wise smoker lyrics critique - accoustic rock

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Nov 25, 2008
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starstarstar 		You're a poet!
by: Jake

This is poetry mate. I would suggest writing about something and telling what it is, because when people can't understand, they get bored. Write a STRUCTURED song about a CERTAIN thing. Check out my song, "Time" and tell me what you think!!!
Jan 13, 2009
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starstarstarstarstar 		good
by: Anonymous

poetry is music. the other guy doesn't know what he is talking about. Write down nirvana lyrics and tell me thats not poetry.
Dec 03, 2009
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starstarstarstarstar 		very good
by: Anonymous

very good i like your song/poem
Jul 26, 2010
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starstarstarstar 		wise smoker
by: Anonymous

I like it too. Unlike many of the other efforts it is short to the point and meaningful. Neta

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