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Will I Be To Late lyrics critique- acoustic lyrics feedback

by Jesse Packard
(Michigan USA)

V1: Ashes to ashes they all fall around me, Turning from ou to pick them back up.
Stop the abuse its tying my arms down, The fate of my life its all in your hands.




CH: So i'll run to you, retracing my footsteps.
I'll call for you, so listen for my voice.
I'll run to you, will I be to late.



V2: Instict constrains me to prove all that I have found, Darkend by words I fall to the ground.
Broken and bruised i'll call out for your hand, Pick me back up and help me to stand.

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