why should i stay (pop/country) - lyrics critique

by jessica
(new york)

i am only 13 so the lyrics might sound cheezy but i tried

While you were staring into space
i was staring at your face
and thinking to myself that i must be dreaming
as im looking in your eyes
you look into mine
and im wondering if you can hear my heart beating

oo why aren't you and me
together like we should be
we should be kissing in the rain but you don't even know my name
someone tell me what it is i'm doing here you wouldn't go out with a girl like me in a million years
oo baby what would you say
if i asked you to give me a reason
why should i stay?

Walking in the hall
and i pass you by
and suddenly all my thoughts fallw
we walk into class you sit in the back
its like we're in two different worlds

oo why aren't you and me
together like we should be
we should be kissing in the rain but you don't even know my name
someone tell me what it is i'm doing here you wouldn't go out with a girl like me in a million years
oo baby what would you say
if i asked you to give me a reason
why should i stay?

( this is where the beat changes and it gets a little faster)
keep my heart onmy sleeve
as i try to get some sleep
turning out the light
trying to get you off my mind
but baby you drive me crazy
i say give me a reason why
i shouldn't walkout the door
without twice
you get down on your knees begging baby dont leave
but of course this is just my dream

oo why aren't you and me
together like we should be
we should be kissing in the rain but you don't even know my name
someone tell me what it is i'm doing here you wouldn't go out with a girl like me in a million years
oo baby what would you say
if i asked you to give me a reason
why should i stay?