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Why? lyric critique acoustic alternative

by Rhz
(India)

Just when i had you off my head
Your voice came whispering into me
Turned into reality by this cold universe
I now see why love hurts

Why do you always say goodbye?
Why do you always walk away?
Leaving me stranded
When you promised you'd stay

My love for you is bottled up inside
If only you could see it
I can be you're knight in shining armour
If only you'd let me be it

I am left without reasons
I am left without a heart
The soul inside me burns
In a heartless hole

I'll be dreaming ways to keep the good alive
Remembering all the times we shared
In the good ol times

As lovers we failed
As friends the same
Can we give it one more try?

Can't stop myself from falling again and again
Will you please just walk away?
Or stay?

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