When I Miss You Lyrics Critique - Ballad

This is a very personal song for me, but i kept the person annonomous. It may need a lot of work because i'm young.

Verse 1:
Why does he
Say that you love me
When i know it's not true
It's like the final cue
The end of me and you
But as hard as i try
to surpress that feeling
That one sentence gave me hope
And it won't disapear

But I can only get hurt
From here
Because that little bit of hope
Will over shadow all my fears
I know it's not rational
But as hard as i try
I can't stop thinking
That you're the guy

Chorus:
I won't forget you
Yu're so unique
When I miss that
Your memory i will keep
Your so special
One of a kind
Everything you do
HAs me strengthening the bind
I just miss you
I hope you do too
If I could kiss you
Thats what I'd do

Brigde:
Your face and eyes
They're so unique
Your laugh and cry
Are so distinct
I'd walk all day
To see you feet
In your yellow shoes
The ones i miss

Verse 2:
So he said
Something that just can't be true
You don't love me now
You don't have to pretend to
The (insert name) that was mine
Is coming to an end
Your slipping from my side
To a place I can't find

Your gonna lose your bright blue sweatshirt
The one i wish that i could wear
Your sneakers and your hair
The things that made me stare
I guees i"ll have the memories
I'll have them til I die
But I have to say goodbye

Chorus:
When I miss you
I'll stay up all night
Remembering the good times
When everything was right