What you want from me - lyrics critique

by Eric Ruffin
(oklahoma)

Verse 1
Every time I come around man I always hear u cry/And believe or not baby I hate to see u cry/havin a piece of mind is somethin money buy/We fittna rise above our problems babe we fittna get high/when I say we go get high I mean high up in the sky/so say goodbye to all yo problems baby girl say goodbye/when we get up in the sky u aint got to worry ‘bout the lies/And if u ever get afraid im go be right there by your side/When we fly high its go be just me and you/Cuz I could give two shits wat them other girls do/Baby girl I love you/And I know you love me too/When I say I love you girl im bein so damn true/And I wish that I could get u what money can buy/But babe I caint so im gonna try/And Satisfy/you/Babe u my one-n-only girl there aint no number 2/And with everything I do im go express my love to u

Hook: Tell me what you want from me/Im tryna be the best that I ca n be /So tell what u want from me/(x3)

Verse 2
See I aint with that he say/ or she say/ im a rider 4 real/ if you aint go hold me down then im go ride out for real/they say that pain is love but it take’s 2 to tango/I wear my heart up on my sleeve man that’s just how the game go/Love bags and prada/Private planes to a charter/You aint a sideline chick baby girl you a starter/See there’s gonna be some hard nights and lonely days/But hard work pays girl that’s if you aint afraid to stay/I love this life im livin I aint mean to put this on ya back/But girl this is me and there aint no changing that/And if im in the streets you know it aint no good to blow up my phone/Just know im out there makin moves and bringin cash back home/Just know im out there makin moves and bringin cash back home/And sometimes its 2 or 3 nights when im out on the road/Just hit me up on g mail we’ll keep it g code/I know you see it wether or not u wanna believe I keep it real so u can either love it or leave it/.