"what to say" - rock - Lyric Critique

by mike
(Cali)

a song i wrote..


Well I woke up this morning,
Not knowing what i'd see today

And just when life seemed boring,
I ran into your face

Now i cant beleive my eyes
I must be losing my mind

I've never seen a girl like you before


Not knowing what to say,
I was at loss for words

While you walked my way,
My head up with the birds

It's been so long now
Since you came 'round here

I'm dieing to see you again