"what to say" - rock - Lyric Critique

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"what to say" - rock - Lyric Critique

by mike
(Cali)

a song i wrote..

Well I woke up this morning,
Not knowing what i'd see today

And just when life seemed boring,
I ran into your face

Now i cant beleive my eyes
I must be losing my mind

I've never seen a girl like you before

Not knowing what to say,
I was at loss for words

While you walked my way,
My head up with the birds

It's been so long now
Since you came 'round here

I'm dieing to see you again

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"what to say" - rock - Lyric Critique

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Mar 17, 2009
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been there
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this looks like some songs i wrote when i was about 12. im 14 now, and my songs are much better. keep going with the style youve got now, and itll evolve into something awesome

Nov 17, 2010
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Nice
by: Anonymous

Hey this could be a great song someday, but to be honest man it sounds like an amazing poem if you wanna go that route with this one

Mar 19, 2011
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potential
by: Anonymous

What you have so far is pretty good, You have a nice idea and it has some potential to be a great song.

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