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"What If" Lyrics Critique- Acoustic song

by Stephanie
(Colorado)

You always told me not to waste my time on you
For some reason I didn’t listen
I fell for you so easily
How could I be so blind

Every time I was around you
I was left speechless
When I was in your arms
My world just disappeared

But you left me with the question:
What if we were together now?

Our future was in your hands
And you let it slip through your fingers
You didn’t realize what was in front of you
So you just turned away

But you left me with the question:
What if we were together now?

You hypnotized me with your lies
Your smile cut right through me
You left me abandoned
You left me broken

But you left me with the question:
What if we were together now?

We should be together now




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"What If" Lyrics Critique- Acoustic song

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Jan 26, 2010
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by: NoReason

I like the way that there's not too much to complicate this

I like it a lot :)

Mar 05, 2010
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Wow!
by: Anonymous

I reaalllyyyy liked it! it was so raw with emotion. And very simple! Anyone who heard this song wuld want to relate to it! Absolutely AMAZING song!

Mar 24, 2010
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by: Kayla

I really like this!! I could so hear it on the radio.

Nov 13, 2010
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Its a good lyric, not to complicated
by: Anonymous

I like acoustic songs, do you have any idea about the music?

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