what girls do (country/pop) - lyrics critique

by jessica
(newyork)

i am 13 and i wrote this in like 5 mins so it might be bad... don't be to harsh


I'm gonna use my hair brush as a microphone
dance aroung my room and singalong to the radio

fix my hair, makeup on
heart on my sleeve gonna have some fun
i've got about a hundred outfits in there still i can't decide just what to wear
boys and diamonds purses and shoes looking for love it's just what girls do

I'm gonna go out in my mini skirt
gonna flip my hair smile and flirt its just what we do
we don't look before we fall and we end up crying when we loose it all for that stupid guy

fix my hair, makeup on
heart on my sleeve gonna have some fun
i've got about a hundred outfits in there still i can't decide just what to wear
boys and diamonds purses and shoes looking for love it's just what girls do

the city is our playground and we own the night we can do nothing at all and still have a good time we take eachothers secrets down to the grave we can go wild or play it safe it's just what we do

fix my hair, makeup on
heart on my sleeve gonna have some fun
i've got about a hundred outfits in there still i can't decide just what to wear
boys and diamonds purses and shoes looking for love it's just what girls do

(this is the part where the beat cahnges btw)

could be rocking the club or relaxing in the tub, crying my eyes out spending the night out, spending hours in the mall and i might just fall for you
it's just what girls do