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victims lyrics critique rock song

by david olsen
(keokuk iowa)

victims
chorus
victims of a tragedy
in your mind is what you see
close your mind blinds your eyes
when will they realize

verse 1
see the problems in foreign lands
goverment steps in to give a hand
see the problems on our soil
just let go in turmoil

chorus
victims of a tragedy
in your mind is what you see
close your mind blinds your eyes
when will they realize

verse 2
the tragedy you will see
no more home land for you and me
how long do they think you can let it go
before i can say i told you so

chorus
victims of a tragedy
in your mind is what you see
close your mind blinds your eyes
when will they realize

verse 3
if they want to continue on
take care of our brothers in arms
many a family right here can say
they have never found prosperity

chours
victims of a tragedy
in your mind is what you see
close your mind blinds your eyes
when will they realize

verse 4
lets help our freinds right here today
stop throwing our money away
to those goverments in foreign lands
reach out and give your sisters and brothers a hand

victims of a tragedy





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Feb 20, 2009
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great song
by: Anonymous

very good i like your song a lot

Mar 17, 2009
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hmmm?
by: Steve tyler

not bad...it`s definatly ...unique, i jus dont know how someone could "ROCK" to those lyrics....

Aug 26, 2009
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Totally awesome
by: Anonymous

I love the lyrics... probably because they are true and so well written. It's nice to have something else to contrast all the love songs of today. ;-) Keep up the brilliant work

Nov 17, 2010
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Amazing rock song
by: Danny

Man i love the lyrics to this song! They sound great! Do you need a band to play and produce it with your name on it?? Cause we'd love to play it man. Contact me at dannymurphy26@yahoo.com if your interested

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