Velvet Sky Lyrics Critique - Unknown Genre. (Only 13, not that good)

by Hollie.M
(New Zealand)

Whispering wind,
Dark city lights,
Walking the streets,
In black velvet night,

(Chorus)
When daylight closes its eyes,
The city comes alive,
We shine like stars in velvet sky,
Watch the night roll by.

Knowing things daylight will miss,
Capturing the loneliness,
Step out into shredded light,
Bring us back to life tonight,

(Chorus)
When daylight closes its eyes,
The city comes alive,
We shine like stars in velvet sky,
Watch the night roll by.

Tired eyes, and we waste away,
Tired eyes, and we waste away,

(Chorus)