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Untitled - Pop song - Lyric review

by Elle

I only have one verse and the chorus done, but I want to know what you guys think of it so far. I would say it's medium tempo (when I write song lyrics, I always hear a melody in my head and that aids me in getting the lyrics).

Here it is:

Verse 1

Always there
Always care
I know you're there for me
When I'm down
You're around
I know you're there for me

Chorus

You and me together
You and I forever
Work in perfect harmony
You and me together
You and I forever
That's how love should be




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Untitled - Pop song - Lyric review

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Aug 21, 2009
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needs more body
by: Lonnie

I thought each line was way to short. maybe you could try using a few more words in each one

Aug 26, 2009
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FABULOUS
by: Anonymous

I thoght the short lines aided the songs, but hey, each to their own. Beautiful rhyming pattern, and it flows really well. Five stars ;-)

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