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Untitled Lyrics - I just need to know if it has potential Alternative

by william
(cocoa fl)


I just put this together for someone...
.



So it's come to this
A resentful life
And tears well cried
Can I take this knife
To your foes and sink it in
Their side
I'm not alright, just like you
I have my own shit to go through
The night will sting,
These words will stick
I promise you

When your stance is shook
By all the awkward looks
I'll be there to guide you

So promise me you'll never loose
The fight in your eyes, your smile of pride
Thirteen years is not the end of life
So you hate the now,
Some day you'll change your mind

The night will sting,
These words will stick
I promise you

When your stance is shook
By all the awkward looks
I'll be there,to guide you




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Untitled Lyrics - I just need to know if it has potential Alternative

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Oct 11, 2008
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hi
by: talitha

I can see what you are saying the song definately has potential but it lacks depth but keep working at it and I believe you will get there good luck

Dec 15, 2008
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uhh..
by: Anonymous

it has potential it can be better, keep working and brush up on the lyrics a little and mabey it can be a lot better.quartz

Jan 15, 2009
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Thanks
by: William

I Appreciate it guys...I forgot I even posted this..Once again thanks for the constructive critisism

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