Untitled Lyrics Critique - Goth/Rock

by MC
(Canada)

Written a while ago, always liked it. Needs Improvement, What do you think?

I feel your eyes burning through my skin
I feel your breath on the wind
I hear your voice singing through the air
I hear your steps but I just don't care

For to long have you haunted me
Stalked me relentlessly
I will not be afraid
I will make you go away

I see your eyes and they're taunting me
I see your hands and they're wanting me
I know you're there and you're watching me
I know you'll never set me free

For to long have I stayed awake
Waiting to see the next move you'll make
You will never have me
No matter what it takes, I shall be free

If I have to kill
I promise you, I will
Every glance at you
Times nearly gone for
You Will let me go

I feel your eyes burning through my skin
I feel your breath on the wind
I hear your voice singing through the air
I hear your steps but I just don't care

I see your eyes and they're taunting me
I see your hands and they're wanting me
I know you're there and you're watching me
I know you'll never set me free