Untitled -i need one! - lyric critique

by Dan

Snow is falling all around seven o’clock and the roads are blocked
There’s nobody in the town so i stay at home
All The schools it seems are all closed, miss out on work the boss a jerk
The country in a standstill the system has froze
1,2,3,4
I don’t work because i don’t have to
I don’t work theres no work for me and you
I get post through my letterbox
I get post saying i’ve lost the lot

CHORUS:
Just another victim of rock’n’roll
Just another bloke who’s lost it all
Just another victim of rock’n’roll
Just another person on the doll
Tonight.....

Homes are reposed every single day
Homes are reposed the people can’t pay
There’s people in debt because they spend too much
There’s people in debt they spend what they ain’t got

CHORUS

I wanna retire when im just 65
I wanna retire and not have to work for my life
To live in a place just for me
And little semi by the sea