unforgetable lyrics critique- pop song

by Hailey Smith
(washington USA)

I'm Hailey, I'm 13 years old and I've been writing songs since I was 6. Singing and songwriting is my dream. This song isn't complete yet, but I wanted to get it reveiwed before I continued writing.

Verse 1
seeing you again makes it that much harder to forget
its killing me to see you leave never knew i could be this broken
every step i take in the opposite diretion is another little crack in my heart
all i see is your face and i want you so bed, wanna feel your touch again


chorus
its too late to say goodbye
its too late to wish away the pain of leaving
one more minute creates another bond
and every bond is unbreakable
your unforgetable X3
yeah