Two Steps Back Lyrics Critique - Rap

by Karen
(Arkadelphia)

chorus:
everytime i take one step
i take two back
going the wrong direction
down the wrong path
i been looking for someone
to show me the way
cuz i know that it gotta
be a better way
i said its..to hard
in the thang that we call life
full all this pain and strife
i get lost everytime
i get off track
everytime i take one step
and two steps back

verse 1:
i sitting in this room
with my hands in my head
im thinking bout my life
and how i don't understand
why i don't comprehend
whats really going on
im walking through my life
with my shoes on wrong
couldn't walk a straight line
even if i tried
cuz everything i do is wrong
so how do i survive?
ive tried ive tried
to make things better
seems like things got worst altogether
through stormy weather
see i be standing in the rain
hoping that the downfall
wash away my pain
im going insane and my mind is going crazy
moms look at me and say..
o dats not my baby

chorus

verse 2:
many times im askin y me?
sometimes it seems like the whole world
is falling down on me
to hard to carry this heavy load
im not strong enough
to even travel this lonely road
the pain and strife
it just takes ova
ain got no friends around
when i need a shoulder
my tears fall like the downfall
of a waterfall
im screaming loud
but no one seems to hear me call
it feels like im living
all by myself
no one around to offer
me a little help
i said im level to the ground
my life is off track
cuz i take one step
then two steps back

chorus

bridge:
i said its to hard
in this thang that we call life
its full of all this pain and strife
i need someone to show me the way
cuz i know that its gotta be a better way
i said its to hard
in this thang that we call life
its full of all this pain and strife
i get lost everytime i get off track
everytime i take one step
and two steps back

Chorus (2x's)