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Turn on your TV! lyrics critique - punk rock

by Ryan Mars
(Alberta Canada)

Standin around In walmart, Leaning up against the wall.
Listining to the beeping, the sound when our dignaty falls. Every year It's the same old sh#t, going over and over again, I cant sleep, I'm losing my mind.

(chorus)
This is how it is,
where were all to what to do,
where were all to what we need to believe.
Turn on your T.V. and watch the mockery and lies.
Is this what we'll become for the rest of our lives?

stuck here with my empty resolve, A ticking clock strapped to a bomb. Something smells a dirty stink, could it be our lives? Every day its the same old thing, and tick tock goes the clock, I cant breathe, I'm going insane!

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
welcome to this world,
where every thing isnt ment to be ok,
would things be better if I was in bed.
Welcome to this utter display of human indecency,
would things be better if everyone elce was dead?

(Chorus)

Thank you for reading, Song is complete with vox, guitar, bass and drums. No recording as of yet.




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Turn on your TV! lyrics critique - punk rock

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Oct 02, 2008
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Blink!
by: Anonymous

I read this with a blink 182 frame of mind and it was great. Keep up the good work.

Oct 08, 2008
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indeed.
by: just a gurrl.

these are great,
ur the next big thing. =)

May 04, 2009
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by: Anonymous

hahaha

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