True To Your Heart Lyrics Critique

by Jessica
(Seattle, WA)

This is a song thought of a while ago. It's not finished yet. However, any feedback about the lyrics would be very much appreciated.


Don’t you feel sometimes like you are alone
People take one look at you and it’s set in stone
That’s who you are.
no second chances to prove what’s in your soul.
You let someone else take all your control.

Fight your pain inside with a broken smile
After they leave, you have to sit down for a while
Then you realize your not being true to yourself
Wipe away your tears and take your heart off that shelf
Then you

Sing out your heart now, Dance how you feel
just let go of everything and then you dreams will come real
grab that hairbrush microphone, let your hair down
Don’t be afraid because now is your time
When your true to your heart, there’s no mountain you can’t climb