Together (Ballad) - Lyrics Critique

by Damien
(UK)

ballad (focused on teenage pregnancy for some reason??)


TOGETHER


theres a place I know its better
Than the state i'm in just now
Driving through completed moments
When theres nothing left to do
pack your things and we can drive away
together



We'll avoid all the shame
Share out all the blame...together
Blunt all the knives
whilst sharpening our lives forever.....




I see your tears are getting wetter
from a river of pain runnin through your heart
stains the curtains and the windows
when theres nothing left to choose
dry your eyes and we can sail away
together




We'll avoid all the shame
Share out all the blame...together
Blunt all the knives
whilst sharpening our lives forever........



Times like these you always get hurt
from the lash of tongues who just dont know
avoiding stares from total strangers
We have no more left to lose
spread your wings and we will fly away
till never..............


We'll avoid all the shame
Share out all the blame...together
Blunt all the knives
whilst sharpening our lives forever