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Title:Believe in me, Electronic dance with vocals in it."lyrics" "critique"

by Petra
(Australia)

Title: Believe in me

I have done all the things right
It was a real fight
I no longer pretend
Will you be my friend?
Change has happening
Change is here, I sincere

Be be believe in me
You just have to get faith in me
Its not right to think I am bad
Don't look so sad
Be be believe in me

You thought I was lying
All I do was trying
Give me a chance, I need it
Pull aside the fear, and give me a kiss

be be believe in me
You just have to get faith in me
Its not right to think I am bad
Don't look so sad
be be believe in me

Now were alright, I could dance the whole night
I would never let you down again
If you want me back, tell me when

be be believe in me
You just have to get faith in me
Times have changed now, and I know that You will believe in me again

Its my first lyric, I wrote it to express my self and to let go of things in my life




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Title:Believe in me, Electronic dance with vocals in it."lyrics" "critique"

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Nov 13, 2010
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Nice self-expression
by: Janmarie

Your lyrics are felt by the listener. It respresents nice prose -- keep on writing. To turn it into a song, I suggest more consistency with the number of lines per verse, and a more defined chorus. You have the basics, now just play with it.


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