"Tired"? Lyrics Critique- Rock

by Dustin
(Bel Air, MD, US)

I've got lots of lyrics for songs, just trying to put them together finally. Tell me what you think. You don't have to be nice. I'd rather have good criticism so i can make it better. Thanks!



(Verse)
I'm tired of faking how I feel,
Tired of acting strong,
So tired of being what you want me to be,
Acting how you want me to act

(Chorus)
I'm Exhausted from all this pretending,
Trying to find myself, (afraid) to be myself
No more lying,
It's time to take control

(Verse)
Always worried what other people think,
Acting how I think I'm supposed to
Personality shaped to their expectations,
Conform to the status quo

(Chorus)
I'm Exhausted from all this pretending,
Trying to find myself, (afraid) to be myself
For better or worse,
It's time to take control


That's all I have for now but any help is wanted and very appreciated. May change the chorus and will be adding an outro, but tell me what you think about what i have so far. Thanks again.