Timeless Tragedy Lyrics Critique - Unfinished/Undecided genre

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Timeless Tragedy Lyrics Critique - Unfinished/Undecided genre

by MC
(Canada)

Half the man he has to hide
Half of him is trapped inside
The shelter of dark hides him away
In this prison he must stay

When the day breaks, the mask goes on
He dreads, and hates and fears the dawn
This dark reality is his to keep
A Timeless Tragedy runs far to deep

This is the Timeless Tragedy of a broken man
A man who's been ripped and torn to pieces
The moment of living the story began
A Timeless Tragedy when in death ceases

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Timeless Tragedy Lyrics Critique - Unfinished/Undecided genre

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Dec 17, 2009
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wolf of the steppes!
by: andrew

these lyrics really remind me of the book steppenwolf, about a man who considers himself half man half wolf and is in a constant inner battle with himself due to a childhood experience which caused him to believe this certain part of himself (or the wolf) is "wrong". he attempts to hide (or tame) that which he believes is animal-like in nature. if that sounds about right might wanna check that book out pretty interesting stuff. either way i enjoyed your lyrics, good presentation and certainly got your message across effectively, nice work

Dec 30, 2009
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GREAT
by: Anonymous

really deep and touching . . good job.

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