Through Your Window - Lyric Critique

by Stef Barney
(Gold Coast, QLD, AUS)

Do you see her through your window?
She walks down the street and whistles
And watched all the cars pass
She hasn’t got any money
Or any food that will last
And so she just walks past your window

Have you seen him out your window?
He chases all of the crows
To see how high they will go
He hasn’t got no toys to play with
And so he deals with
Everything outside your window

Do you see them through your window?
Or do you pretend to not know?
As they walk with their head held low
As they walk slowly by
Can you see them cry?
Or do you close your eyes
Outside your own window