This world?? lyrics critique- up tempo rock/pop

by Kawika Osborn
(Hawaii)

I sat down and came up with this..my first, please be honest

V1
What have we turned into?
Thou shalt not judge
It seems that it is all you do
The leignths youll go to
starting wars with
people not like you
That dont beleive too
In the same God
that you pray to
The other side too
Shame on all of you
If this keeps up
then all will loose

chorus
Before this world comes to an end
Id like to see us all be friends
or at least have tollerance
and just use some common sense
I think about the future too
What my children will go through
If we deny the awful truth
And keep doing what we do......we keep doing what we do

V2
All I see is war
What are we fighting for
Put your guns down
Turn around and find the door...
To peace and happiness
where everybodys blessed
Lets put an end to all this silliness
Just take a look around
And see whats going down
In your town
and worldround
If things dont change
Were sure to drown

Reapeat chorus

bridge
Before any more wives end up alone
And all their kids have grown
We need to bring all our heros home

Reapeat chorus