this house of hate. rap. lyrics discussion

by ryan ramjohn
(barrie, ontario, canada)

this is my first attempt for writing lyrics and i think its pretty good here check for your self; this house of hate.

walkin the door,just disgusted with the floor,
been ata friends all day, tryin to excape,this house of hate.
this cant be my faite.i cant be the bait,for the start of this trait.
i gota leave, i got achieve ,
my goal to be ahead of this toll.
just laying in bed, wishing i were dead,
i cant complete this trend, its time to bend,
its almost the end.
walkin in the door, dusgusted with the floor,
been ata friends all day, trying to excape, this house of hate,
this is not my faite.
i am the bait,
i am the key, noone can defeat me.
i am the lock, and the times all most up, tick tock.
gota keep your eyes on the clock,
shit be blowing up on da block,
feel like i need a glock.
bro be beating me like a rock.
its time for the shock,
hurry up, tick tock
tryin getout the door,
but lil tiggy's be running down the floor.
cannot excape , this is my faite.
i am the bait, i have been beat, there is no cheat,
i am not the key, everyone can defeat me,
i am unlocked, and times up tick tock.

all of these lines relate on past memories of my life.