"This Darkness" - rock- Lyrics Critique

by Secluded Dreams
(Florida)

Awaken a dream
Take away my pain
Hold me close to you
Never run away

I call for you From out of this darkness
Reach in pull me through
When I run away
Find me hiding in the shadows
Pull me out bury me inside your eyes

Release me from this pain
Bring me away from this darkness
Stare into my eyes; crawl inside
I will fight don?t run away

Grab hold of me
Don?t let me go; never let go

I scream out to you
Sever the ties that hold me here
Carry me away from this darkness
Capture me inside your eyes

My soul I crave to release but fear prevents me
I need you grab me devour me empower me
Embrace me inside your soul; I?ll never leave