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This bluebird can fly - country - (suggestions, tips, feedback)

by Hayley

I need some feedback on my lyrics, i find lyrics kinda hard to write. This is a country song about how someone can change someone for the better, the tempo of the song is slow. Any sugestions, or hints and tips for righting lyrics will be highly aprieciated.

Verse 1
We walked down the dirt road
By the pasture next to your yard
past the town oh that little town
With the church on the right hand side

Chorus
You are my lullaby song
Everything’s right its never wrong
Now you healed my broken wings
Recklessly taking flight
Now this blue bird can fly

Verse 2
Jumping head long into you
An instant catch to break my fall
Arms open wide to hold me
In this enchanted moment

Chorus
You are my lullaby song
Everythings right its never wrong
Now you healed my broken wings
Recklessly taking flight
Now this blue bird can fly

Bridge
We’ve had our ups and downs
Like an airliner in the clouds
On the bumpy road
We swerved along
In the end we found the better path
Off the troubled track

Chorus
You are my lullaby song
Everything’s right its never wrong
Now you healed my broken wings
Recklessly taking flight
Now this blue bird can fly

Verse 3
Ill spread my wings
If I fall you will heal my broken wing

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