Things Will Be Better Tomorrow - Rock - Lyrics Critique

by Taylor
(California, United States)

so i made this song up for my band and i need honest feedback on it thanks guys!

As you bear a burden of what used to be
as your are mending your shattered memories
as you are trying to find my way
to the place where you want to be
knowing everything will soon be fine
Close your eyes and take life in for a suprise

CHORUS
Forget the past
forget what almost was
wont you remember
remember the one thing that will get you by
because things will be better tomorrow

this may be too good to be true
to begin a new day
so just take the necessary steps
to know that feeling
to know never let that feeling end

Forget the past
forget what almost was
wont you remember
remember the one thing that will get you by
because things will be better tomorrow

BRIDGE
So forget
forget what almost was
forget the mistakes you once made


and as your walking too far ahead
to the path of forgetfulness
we can only remember that things will be better tomorrow