The Worst Thing About You Lyrics Critique-- Alt. Rock Song

Remember the day 
A few years ago 
You ruined everything
And after that day 
When you went home
Did you even think of me?

The worst thing about you
You're so insensitive
When you've got your mind set
You're so competitive 
You always have to win

CHORUS
One day that's gonna change
You'll wake up 
and nothing is the same
You will get what Remember the day 
A few years ago 
You ruined everything
And after that day 
When you went home
Did you even think of me?

The worst thing about you
You're so insensitive
When you've got your mind set
You're so competitive 
You always have to win

CHORUS
One day that's gonna change
You'll wake up 
and nothing is the same
You will get what you deserve 
I hope then you'll finally learn
You hurt me, you knew it too
And that's the worst thing about you

Remember the time
You made everything
Harder than it had to be
Times flying by 
But I'll never forget 
All that you did to me

The worst thing about you 
You're so insensitive 
When you get your mind set 
You're so competitive 
You  always have to win

CHORUS

What is this illusion
You seem to have
That you're perfect
Whoever said
You had the right
To make me feel worthless

CHORUS (x2)

You hurt me 
I know that you knew it too
And thats 
the worst thing about you

I don't like it all that much. Lately I don't have much confidence at all in my songs, and I always get stuck when I m writing them. Any advice about that would be really helpful, and please tell me what you think about this song!! :)

Remember the time
You made everything
Harder than it had to be
Times flying by 
But I'll never forget 
All that you did to me

The worst thing about you 
You're so insensitive 
When you get your mind set 
You're so competitive 
You  always have to win

CHORUS

What is this illusion
You seem to have
That you're perfect
Whoever said
You had the right
To make me feel worthless

CHORUS (x2)

You hurt me 
I know that you knew it too
And thats 
the worst thing about you