The Sun Sets In Your Eyes - Lyrics Critique

by Catrionaa
(Nottingham)

I Wrote This Randomly Hope You Like It :) x

Verse
It Was A Sunny Sunday Afternoon,
You Started Humming My Favourite Tune,
On A Bench Beneath The The Clear Blue Sky,
Preparing Myself For The Long Goodbye,
The Great Things In Life Don't Even Last,
At Least That's What I'd Learnt From My Past.

Chorus
You Placed Your Arm Around My Waist,
I Glanced Up At Your Smiling Face,
As Your Eyes Melted Into Mine,
A Shudder Rippled Down My Spine,
Tasting The Moment In The Air,
This Was More Than A Small Affair,
And That Was When I Realised,
That The Sun Sets In Your Eyes.

Verse
5 Years On And We're Still Together,
You Say Our Love Will Last Forever,
I Say Nothing, Make No Eye Contact,
You Know I'm Scared Of The Long-Term Contract,
I Think Back To The Great Day In June,
Oh That Sunny Sunday Afternoon.

Chorus

Verse
Lying On The Couch, Wrapped Up In Your Arms,
Thinking About All Your Many Charms,
You Grabbed My Hand, Played With My Fingers,
There Sat A Diamond White As Winters,
I Could Feel The Shock Swamp Through My Head,
When You Got Down On One Knee And Said.

Verse
It Was A Sunny Sunday Afternoon,
I Started Humming Your Favourite Tune,
It's Just Me And You Against The World,
'Cause You Were Worth More Than Diamonds And Pearls,
The Great Things In Life Can Always Last,
At Least That's What I'd Learnt From My Past,

Chorus
I Placed My Arm Around Your Waist,
And Glanced Down At Your Worried Face,
We Were So Right For Each Other,
Together Life Was Way Funner,
I Knew I Would Always Love You,
And I Don't Think You Ever Knew,
But That Was When I Realised,
That The Sun Sets In Your Eyes.

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