The story of flings. - Alternative, Indie, Crude. Lyrics Critique

Verse One:
Where have you gone? I wish I knew,
Where have you been when I need you,
You are so far and yet so near,
I can't even smile without you here.

But I know I havn't crossed your brain..
*As the traffic lights havn't let me yet.*

Chorus:

And you can live on without me,
Like we never begun.
And you can smile with-your perfect being,
As bright as the sun,
< Theres nothing i can, theres nothing i can do,>
(mp) except to try live in this empty light,
**Lost without you.

Verse Two:
Where have I gone? I'm a cold flame,
Without you I can't burn the same,
But atleast I can still burn and
Annticipate your return.

But Its getting so hard to love you,
As when we loved it was like.. *shaggin' a pole.*

Chorus:
And you were living on with out me,
Like we never begun,
And you could smile with your perfect being,
As dark as the sun,
Theres nothing I can, theres nothing I can do,
except to live in this empty light,
Slightly **lost without you.

Verse Three:
Where have you gone? Your not the same,
Without you Ive begun to find my name,
But now your shading your bright sun,
(calando): Dont bother coming back to me, it seems I've won.


Be a f*ckin' man.. *and run.*

Chorus: (sfz)
And you can't live on without me,
Like we always begun,
And you can't smile with your less perfect being,
As dark as the sun,
(ff)Theres nothing I can, theres nothing I can do,
(mp) Except to let you come crawling back,
Just so i can say *''F*ck you''.* (al neite)



*....* : music (accustic guitar) stops here, and singer talks the words.

**: music stops here for the rest of the line, but singer keeps singing lyrics.

<...> : Crescendo on line.

Note: all letters and words are not lyrics. Just incase it confused some people.

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