the Secretive Strength of Animal Worship- lyrics critique

by C.C

The Secretive Strength of Animal Worship

VERSE
there are some things so closely guarded
sealed tightly in a metal case
the case is held together by a combination
of steadfast belief and iron nails

the case is then submerged three feet deep
first in water, then in snow
it protects all that is inside, which is
the secretive secrets of animal wor-ship

CHORUS
the secretive strength of animal worship
the strength of which is extremely strong
sort of like a tiger cause tigers are strong
powered by the srength of secret worship

VERSE
one who wields this secretive strength
can overpower any adversary
one who faces this secretive strength
will be overpowered immediately

but by surfacing the case and unlocking it
then throwing away the contents within
you can secretly dispose of the secret strength
the secretive secrets of animal wor-ship

BRIDGE
find the case, here is a map
animals are waiting, inside a tree
the tree is hollowed out
to accommodate the hiding animals

CHORUS

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