The Last Thing I Need - Lyrics Critique

by David Wright
(Deming, New Mexico)

It's over now I'm leaving
and then she turned to go
our time together haunts me
like a name I used to know.
When darkness falls in silence
I see in dreams at night
reflections of the feelings shared
fading with the light.
(chorus)
But yet in time with love reborn
the heartaches left behind
the last thing that I need
is her still on my mind.

Nursing my emotions
in the quiet of my room
I hold no fear of lonesome
nor sorrow in the gloom.
My hand around a bottle
while the hours slowly pass
finding little pleasure
at the bottom of a glass.
(chorus)
But yet in time with love reborn
the heartaches left behind
the last thing that I need
is her still on my mind.
(fade to close)
The last thing that I need
is her still on my mind.