The Last Stand lyrics critique (rock)

by charlie
(carterville, Illinois)

this is the last stand
I can't take no more
trying to take you by the hand
as you close the door
this is the last stand
you used me way to long
you bit me in the hand
so now I'm gone
you knocked me to the ground
and stomped on my heart
you kicked me all around
and now it's dark
you beat me black and blue
than you laugh
baby, now that were through
you can kiss my ass

I don't care
what you do
you say it's fare
all the shit, you put me through
you think you're cool
but you just don't know
you feed me your bull
so now, it's on with the show
I don't need you here
so stay away
don't get near
or I'll make you pay
I'll show you how it feels
to be torn in two
you'll see that it is real
when your heart is black and blue
cus what comes around,
goes around
and this you will see
cus you'll be found
down on your knees
you play your little games
and you think you one
but you're driving me insane
and baby, your games done

this is the last stand
cus we're finished now
I don't want to take you by the hand
cus I don't know how
this is the last stand
you used me everyday
you bit me in the hand
so now you're gonna pay
you ripped out my heart
and left me full of pain
and now it's dark
and baby, you're gonna feel the same
you used me for the last time
so now your hearts gonna be mine
and you're gonna pay
for all the pain,
you put me through
day after day

when you ripped out my heart
I didn't understand
now we're gonna have another round
and this time, I'm dealing the hand
I've taken the last stand
for the final time
but now you understand
cus I'm in your mind