The Fool's Shame- Pop - Lyrics Critique

by Blair
(Maryland, USA)

Verse 1: Baby the love life or a western
Realize that there’s one way to find
That long dark light footed mind
In the deepest burnt hard infection
Conditions are put into place
My knees could give out I’m insane
If you feel that you get behind
Take this dollar and see
What cheep ways can make you happy

Chorus: This premonition, someone unruly
Someone not painting a portrait to see
Life ambition, in a circular case
Told never to give my cards away
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Vir-virginia

Verse 2: Your mouth never looked so wide
Where you ate all of the sounds
Sometimes I feel like in Athens
Delusion wrote on every wall
She explained something so short term
I felt the burn in every hour
Highlights turn make up ground
I’m just a scare without a host
Waiting for that empty mouth

Chorus: This premonition, someone unruly
Someone not painting a portrait to see
Life ambition, in a circular case
Told never to give my cards away
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Richard

Verse3: Problem and dysfunction
Can’t help to fit it out
In hind sight proper figure
Maybe she could read us out
Traits my light tonight
Lauryn
Grace
Living in the ghetto

Chorus: This premonition, someone unruly
Someone not painting a portrait to see
Life ambition, in a circular case
Told never to give my cards away
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame
Fool’s shame fo-ol’s shame sha-a-a-a-a-a-ame